the waters of venus by louis garden

The Waters of Venus by Louis Garden

Chapter 1

Louis, Eden, Alex and Tobias went on a space adventure. They each had their own special space ship. When they landed they all ventured out of there ships. Tobias and Alex were in green, Eden and Louis were in blue. Louis was captain. Eden was deputy captain.

When they got out they saw lots of space aliens. Small ones and big ones. Cute ones and scary ones.

Chapter 2

Because Louis was captain he went into the alien den first.

He took his big black gun which was very lucky because it was very dangerous in there.

Big scary aliens came out from all corners

One was long and thin like a snake with lots of eyes, another was fiery and yellow like the sun

Louis took control straight away. All the aliens looked at him, waiting for his instructions

Meanwhile Eden was in the second alien zone. there was a long red jelly like alien coming up close.

Eden saw it and quickly zapped it with a laser. Then a green three eyed alien began to come closer, but it stopped and looked sad when it saw the red alien

Eden thought she was safe but little did she know that....

...the water levels were rising. The red and yellow water levels were looked low, but then she noticed the grey water level was moving to the top. Suddenly she noticed the orange water level was already over flowing. 

Eden was about to call out but then she got hypnotised by a red and white spiral monster.

Meanwhile on the other side of the rocky canyon Tobias was battling four blue aliens and one green alien and an Orange hypnotising spiral monster, he was so quick to the hypnotising monster couldn't get him.

the water was still rising and beginning to overflow and the cracks were getting bigger. Tobias was trying to work out what to do. How could he get the water levels to drop back down.

Chapter 3

Meanwhile Alex was in a cave with a big snake like monster that had a head like a grey Puffle. He managed to stun the aliens, they all stopped as if playing musical statues.

Then as if by magic the water levels started to drop. The water levels must have been controlled by the aliens thought Alex. He quickly put his gun in his pocket and quietly slipped past the aliens and started to run back to the space ship."I wonder where the others are" he thought.

When he got to his ship he saw that his friends were in their space ships. He got in his just in time to escape the green alien. Once the team were all safely in there ships, they looked back to planet Venus. The rings around the planet were broken "So that's why the waters were moving"said Louis "it wasn't the aliens after all".

1. They all arrived back at the space station. Louis was just in time to clean out the hamster that was called Calidlier Galaxy. Alex and Tobias were doing an experiment. What they were doing was:-

                                        1 they got two boxes
                                        2 they got two leads
                                        3 they got electro-powered legs

and the ship was working again!

Louis and Eden were at the table drinking water, then on the phone an alien was phoning them

It was saying( when translated into English) "Bottom, you come here. 66 is my age. Now Eden has killed my only horse alien so all of my aliens can not get to the clouds of Jupiter with me" Then they heard a rumble in the space station, they thought it was an alien. They replied to the alien that they were very sorry. they did not mean to kill they only stun. But they were interested in the clouds of Jupiter.

So began the plan for the next adventure.